User talk:Grandtutor/sandbox-GertTownDraft

Infobox

 * New picture
 * Something that is well known/significant in Gert Town
 * Look around for some pictures that we are able to use on Wikipedia
 * Multiple pictures to show numerous parts
 * Double check information to make sure that it is correct and accurate
 * Anything about government and officials
 * Any nicknames, mottos, any symbols that represent Gert Town
 * Gert Town location on map with accurate boundaries
 * Date of founding, who it was named after

Lead

 * Don't start each paragraph with Gert Town -- gets repetitive
 * Syntax a little strange
 * Need the lead to flow into the rest of the body of the content

Demographics
* Add Katrina sub-section so demographic can condense * Vertical migration paragraph put in Geography
 * Combine similar information/topics so it is less repetitive
 * Put the info/dates in chronological order

Culture
Add Subcategories for specific sections such as Jazz, Hip Hop Music category Take out Notable People

Geography
* Eliminate boundaries section and add to Geography
 * Introduce Landmarks in Geography section
 * Further explain Landmarks in their own section
 * Start where Gert Town is in the world
 * Then other components pertaining to Geography

History

 * Start with the earliest date
 * 2 people mentioned in "Gehrke Town"
 * Bring the last paragraph to the top
 * 7 different paragraphs
 * should be ordered as 7, 1, 4, 3, 2, 5, 6
 * Merge #1 into #7
 * Paragraph 4, end of the sentence is abrupt and does not flow
 * Expand the info at the end of paragraph 4