User talk:Grantchamp31/sandbox

i want to copy edit monochromacy for small errors

I want to add citations to the article on woodworking joints — Preceding unsigned comment added by Grantchamp31 (talk • contribs) 17:58, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good choices. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:44, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Your sources look excellent. Just make sure your editing doesn't spill over into writing tutorials. Stick to encyclopedic style. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:40, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Did you forget to add the sources to the article? Josef Horáček (talk) 19:31, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

I plan on adding and editing a lead section for wildfire suppression equipment and personnel Grantchamp31 (talk) 16:59, 20 February 2015 (UTC) I see issues in this article in the way it is structured. Not all sections are given equal weight of importance. The article uses words that the general public may not know and fails to explain these words.Grantchamp31 (talk) 19:02, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Very good. The opening sentence in the current lead doesn't make much sense. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:30, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Your new lead is simple and to the point. Post it. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:56, 10 March 2015 (UTC)