User talk:Grantchen16/sandbox

you capitalized "After" in paragraph two when you were talking about the two chinasHfong123 (talk) 02:31, 7 June 2017 (UTC)Hfong123

you have all the ideas down, just maybe make the paragraphs flow more evenly, it seemed very choppy and hard to read at times.02:31, 7 June 2017 (UTC)Hfong123

Forgot to add a category section, use == Category == and add to it by using Iacevesd