User talk:Green Dragon Pride

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Ad Orientem (talk) 23:45, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

June 2020
Hello. Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia.

I noticed your recent edit to RSVP does not have an edit summary.&#32;Please be sure to provide a summary of every edit you make, even if you write only the briefest of summaries. The summaries are very helpful to people browsing an article's history.

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Please use the edit summary to explain your reasoning for the edit, or a summary of what the edit changes. With a Wikipedia account you can give yourself a reminder to add an edit summary by setting.  Feel free to ask on my talk page if you have any questions! Ed6767  talk!  00:17, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

Your thread has been archived
Hello, I'm Materialscientist. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —specifically this edit to Goodbye Town—because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help desk. Thanks. Materialscientist (talk) 01:15, 15 June 2020 (UTC)
 * The band changed their name to Lady A in support of Black Lives Matter, so I'm changing the articles to reflect that. Green Dragon Pride (talk) 01:16, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

Crocodile Dundee
Hello,

I didn't make any "unconstructive edits" to the Crocodile Dundee page. As I explained in my edit comment, the two sections are virtually identical, and it's hugely redundant to keep the same information twice on the same page. I'm not looking for an edit war -- I was just trying to clean up the page. Please compare the two sections -- you'll see what I mean.

Thanks. 209.90.140.72 (talk) 02:30, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

The Lead sentence, the lead, and the body
Green Dragon Pride, you're still quite new here, and it does take a while to learn the sometimes arcane rules around here. I reverted your changes at Conversion therapy a second time, and before you try again, you should probably know a few basics. The welcome message left for you above by is actually worth going through and following the links to learn about some of our basic policies.

The lead is a summary, a "mini-version" of the article, if you will, and not a journalism-style introduction. Since it's a summary of the rest of the article, it often doesn't make sense to head straight for the lead. Normally the sequence is, change something in the body, then bring the lead into line. The first sentence defines the topic, and says what it is about. The rest of the lead summarizes the whole article.

You recently made changes to the WP:LEADSENTENCE of Conversion therapy on two occasions: here, and here. In the first case, you tried to add gender identity to the definition. But of all the many references in the body of the article, none of them talk about changing gender identity (i.e., converting someone from transgender to cisgender) through treatement. Maybe there have, in fact, been cases where they tried to do that; in that case, the proper approach would be to find reliable reports about it, add a section to the body, and only then, summarize that information in the lead. It's true that the body of the article has numerous references about different countries outlawing therapy that would attempt to change someone's gender identity without saying that this has ever occurred, so if you wanted to add a statement about laws around the world regarding attempting to change gender identity, you could (only that appears to be coverd in the lead already; perhaps it could be expanded, if not too WP:UNDUE WEIGHT.

In the second case, you again made a change to the lead sentence, which previously said,"Conversion therapy is the pseudoscientific practice of trying to change an individual's sexual orientation from homosexual or bisexual to heterosexual using psychological, physical, or spiritual interventions." and dropped some key terms, so that it now read"Conversion therapy is the pseudoscientific practice of trying to change an individual's sexual orientation using psychological, physical, or spiritual interventions." along with the edit summary, "...due to the existence of other sexual orientation terms such as pansexual and asexual I think it seems best not to specify what it is being changed from."

While not wrong, your new version is less precise, and it leaves out a crucial aspect of many sources in the article describing what conversion therapy really is, namely, the attempted conversion of gay people to straight. But worse, it seems to be motivated by your personal opinion or feelings of what "is best" rather than what the sources say. There is simply no evidence that conversion therapy was ever used for pansexual or asexual people; however, if you have or can find reliable evidence to the contrary, we can by all means add that to the article. But in that case, let's start by adding that to the body first; once that settles down, we can think about how to adjust the lead, if necessary.

At this point, I hope you won't try to change the lead again, especially not the lead sentence. It's okay that you tried; Wikipedia is about being WP:BOLD; so it's fine to try things out. That said, when you get some pushback, that's the time to discuss with your fellow editors to try and reach a consensus, and the place to do that, is on the article talk page. This is both to avoid something called edit warring, as well as to adhere to the principle of WP:BRD&mdash;Bold, Revert, Discuss. Your bold edits have been Reverted, so now you should Discuss it on the talk page, not try another change to the lead.

It's hard for a new editor to get on board, by paying attention solely to the lead. I would recommend trying your changes first to the body of whatever article interests you, and see how that is accepted, or not, by other editors first. Once you get a high rate of accepted edits, then you can start making concomitant changes to the lead. That also adheres to the WP:LEADFOLLOWSBODY guideline. That would be my advice, but it's your choice. Feel free to talk to me here (ping me in that case, please) or on my Talk page. Hope this helps. And, welcome to Wikipedia! Mathglot (talk) 07:41, 30 July 2020 (UTC)

Standard notice about editing gender-related articles
Hello again. I just noticed that besides Conversion Therapy, you've also edited Sex assignment and Transphobia. There are some things you need to know about editing gender-related articles. Following is a standard notice about this. Basically, the notice informs you that beyond all the regular rules around here, there are a more stringent set of rules governing the behavior of editors who edit in certain controversial areas, like gender, that you need to know about. Please read it, and follow the links. Thanks, Mathglot (talk) 08:11, 30 July 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for the message. My goal with those edits was to be a little more inclusive, since it can be a problem for people with LGBTQ+ identities like mine that are beyond the original LGBT when sexual orientation is narrowly defined by only those letters, especially in things like discrimination protections. I understand where you're coming from though, so I think it is a good idea to use the talk page before significant changes. I will look at the references if they are available online to see what they say before doing anything else similar. Green Dragon Pride (talk) 03:27, 31 July 2020 (UTC)


 * I fully understand. And, yes, for the talk page.  There are many others like us, but we just need to understand and put Wikipedia's concerns first, remembering that it is an encyclopedia (hence, a WP:TERTIARY source) based on reliable WP:SECONDARY sources. Within those definitions, and a few rules (Wikipedia calls them "policies and guidelines") about WP:Verifiability, Neutral point of view, WP:DUEWEIGHT, and a few others, you can gradually add things that take into account your concerns, as long as they adhere to the rules.  Many others here can help. You can ask at the article talk pages, or at the LGBT Project. If you have a specific question, or an LGBT-related issue you'd like to discuss, that's the place to do it. People there will be glad to answer your questions or help you on any topic relating to LGBT+. If you do, ping me there, so I can follow along, and maybe respond. For general questions about Wikipedia, try the Tea House. Glad to have you here, and happy editing! Mathglot (talk) 06:18, 31 July 2020 (UTC)

Transport
I saw on your user page that you're interested in transportation. Wikipedia has what we call "Projects" where people of like mind get together, to discuss how to improve articles about their area of interest, and create new ones. One such project, is called WikiProject Trains. You could have a look around there, and maybe at its talk page (click the 'Talk' tab at the top of the Project page), and see what's going on there. There are probably other WikiProjects for other transportation areas as well. You can try searching for some here, to find people and articles interested in the same things. Mathglot (talk) 06:30, 31 July 2020 (UTC)

dana boyd's name
You reverted the changes I made on the Berkman Klein Center for Internet & Society's page. You shouldn't capitalize dana boyd and I explained that when I made the correction. Take some time to read her own explanation: https://www.danah.org/name.html. She is a very public person, maybe you should know that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 187.178.75.233 (talk) 18:51, 12 August 2020 (UTC)

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Please note that 2020 United States presidential election is under special restrictions, and there is considerable discussion on the talk page about how and when to add results. – bradv  🍁  16:06, 4 November 2020 (UTC)