User talk:Greenalien2

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Too technical
In the article Persistent polyclonal B-cell lymphocytosis, you added a section on Molecular and immunological analysis that is overly technical. Remember, Wikipedia is an encyclopedia intended for general readership, not a medical journal. Can you please edit the article to clarify the terminology you have used in this section to make it more accessible to general readers? Thank you!!
 * Removing the section heading was not quite the fix that was required. The heading is fine, it's the text following it that is too technical.  WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 17:03, 16 November 2009 (UTC)