User talk:Greenc12345

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Hello, Greenc12345, this is Adam Young from your Advanced Writing Class! Amyoung15 (talk) 21:25, 22 July 2016 (UTC)

Hey Christy! Really good job with article. You included a lot of sources and clearly conveyed what post operative rehabilitation is like. My suggestions would be to expand upon the 'specific exercises' that you mention in the second paragraph. I would also either re-word or provide a source for when you say '(the earlier the better)'. Is there a reason why this is better? The other thing I noticed was when you linked to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Continuous_passive_motion, it has a sentence that contradicts what you wrote. The sentences in question are yours: "Additionally, CPM is inexpensive, convenient, and assists patients in therapeutic compliance" and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Continuous_passive_motion: "Additionally, CPM is expensive, inconvenient, and brings risk of complication while distracting patients from useful treatment." Not sure what the correct fact is but I thought I would bring it up. The last thing is a small typo (third paragraph, first sentence): "will can improve". I think you wanted to get rid of one of those. There's not really any holistic changes I would make, so I don't really have any other suggestions. Again, awesome job!! Koleary94 (talk) 23:34, 31 July 2016 (UTC)