User talk:Gregdetre

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Talk page note about Drunk Tank Pink
Hi, thanks for your note on my talk page. Sounds a very interesting book, but I think one of the problems you face here is that it is very recently published and may not pass the Wikipedia notability guidelines without a bit more neutral referencing – see here WP:N. You may also want to consider toning down any phrases in the article that sound too promotional and beefing up the book's description so that it provides a clearer summary of content. Also consider adding more Wikilinks – for instance, Drunk Tank Pink is referred to at Baker-Miller Pink and there are also linkable pages for psychology, marketing, Princeton, NYU and so on. Don't include details about the book as a reference – place that underneath under the heading External links. Hope that helps. Libby norman (talk) 11:25, 11 April 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Drunk Tank Pink (book) concern
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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Drunk Tank Pink (book)


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Rankersbo (talk) 08:23, 24 January 2014 (UTC)