User talk:Greifaq

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Hello, Greifaq, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hi Greifaq. I reverted your addition to the article. Suggestion. Instead of one umbrella kitchen sink edit, try tweaking each sentence one at a time. This will help you proof read for grammar/type errors, and it will help the rest of us review each one in turn. Its likely much (most?) or your work is fine. The main problem I had was with the last part talking about labor. The cited source doesn't actually say what you said it says. Welcome to wiki! We all get reverted, it just makes us better eds, so please don't take it personal. Glad to have you on board  NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 18:43, 6 March 2018 (UTC)