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Tracey Chung's Peer Review
Illustration: I think this graph was an excellent representation of depicting the hyperactivation of he male X chromosome. It really allows your readers to have a much better understanding of what is happening.

I think you should define what the (structural genes) are in the 1st sentence of your paragraph. I’d suggest that you include the name of the sex-lethal protein so that your readers can know the exact name. What is the name of this stop codon in the male X chromosome?

References: Your references are formatted properly. Overall, this article draft was very informative and simple to understand by anyone who would not have much knowledge on the topic. Great job! Traceychung (talk) 01:58, 18 March 2018 (UTC)

X hyperactivation
I am making edits for the X hyperactivation article for my developmental biology class.Greigh163 (talk) 05:56, 24 March 2018 (UTC)