User talk:Greta.k.herschlip/sandbox

I made the three sections. Do you guys have any idea what we need to all do for the wiki page and how you want it to look?AlecsisJ (talk) 16:26, 12 October 2016 (UTC)alecsis

For this assignment, I can do the symptoms and the differences between oneirophrenia and schizophreniaAlecsisJ (talk) 15:57, 14 October 2016 (UTC)alecsis

To-Do List

 * Edit the symptoms
 * Find treatments

Outline
AlecsisJ (talk) 15:08, 14 October 2016 (UTC)alecsis i. symptoms ii. differences between oneirophrenia and schizophrenia AlecsisJ (talk) 15:08, 14 October 2016 (UTC)alecsis i. Shock Therapy AlecsisJ (talk) 15:08, 14 October 2016 (UTC)alecsis i.Famous cases
 * Oneirophrenia
 * Treatment
 * History

Feedback
Nice work on your draft. Just a few things to think about or fix
 * In the lead you say "50s" and "60s". Make sure you specify the century.
 * The current Oneirophrenia article says that that the diagnosis isn't used much. Is that true? If so, you should say so.
 * On that note, your sources are all from the 1950s and 60s. It would be very helpful if you could include some more recent sources, especially when you discuss the drugs used for treatment.
 * Only proper nouns should be capitalized; since oneirophrenia isn't one, it should only be capitalized at the start of a sentence. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:23, 6 December 2016 (UTC)