User talk:Grey Alice

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chris Daw (March 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Qcne were:

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 Qcne  (talk)  22:00, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Chris Daw (barrister) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Chris Daw (barrister). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 19:34, 7 March 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chris Daw (barrister) (March 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Paul W was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Paul W (talk) 11:22, 11 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi, Grey Alice. Thanks for your email. It is not that there "too many reference articles ... written by Chris Daw" (they can, of course, be retained) - it is that there are too few citations about Chris Daw. The sections about his early life and education, his legal career and some paragraphs of the Notable cases section contain no citations at all, and BLPs require all significant assertions that might be challenged to be supported by reliable sources. I hope this helps. Paul W (talk) 11:52, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest
Hello, Grey Alice. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page Draft:Chris Daw (barrister), you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for article subjects for more information. We ask that you:


 * avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Paul W (talk) 12:20, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chris Daw (barrister) (July 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Chris Daw (barrister) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Chris_Daw_(barrister) Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:SafariScribe&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Chris_Daw_(barrister) reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 17:18, 7 July 2024 (UTC)