User talk:Grobinson22

Welcome
Hello,, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback on sandbox draft
Hi! I wanted to give you a bit of feedback on the draft. So far it looks great - the only two things of note is that you need to do inline citations rather than ones styled like (Name, date, page) and that the second paragraph needed some tweaking to remove POV type words. It's not that they're bad, they're just words that could be seen as coming from one person's point of view rather than from a neutral encyclopedia. (IE, an encyclopedia is supposed to be "faceless" per se, in that it shouldn't read like it was written by one person. This honestly took me a long time to get used to myself.) The main thing is the sentence "The Polish post-communist experience is unique."

Other than that, the section looks like it's progressing well. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:27, 10 July 2017 (UTC)