User talk:Gruskyd/sandbox

Review of Ketogenesis Article
Overall, I think you did a good job adding useful information to the article. The biggest issue that I found was the citation format that you used to the parts that you added. Make sure to use the Wikipedia format of numbered citations. Even if you are using the same citation more than once you should refer to it in the Wikipedia format. You could also probably use more citations for the Regulation section. Maybe Kelly will have some good ones as those are things that we went over in class.

Other than these citation issues, I think you did a really good job of expanding on the article and making it easy to understand. Avevanduz (talk) 02:12, 10 April 2017 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the feedback. I altered the article a bit and the references have been fixed. Gruskyd (talk) 21:30, 12 April 2017 (UTC)