User talk:Guanbo Wang/sandbox

Peer Review
Article outline seems well crafted if underdeveloped. Introducing Headings and subheadings to separate different sections as needed to enhance the flow and formatting of the article. Consider adding sources to enhance reliability. Page continues to be well laid out and use of data to support arguments is well encouraged.

You did very good job of changing the Wikipedia. My writing level is limited, so I can not give you useful advice. I am sorry about that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Qiziyang (talk • contribs) 15:12, 25 June 2019 (UTC)

In your article, you can summarize information that get from sources, then post some pictures. The main content can be divided into different parts, different subtopics also describe a part of information., It can make your edit looks better. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zhl16144 (talk • contribs) 14:05, 26 June 2019 (UTC)

I think you can discuss more about the relation of school web with students and faculty. The school web must have some help to students. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Qiziyang (talk • contribs) 14:07, 26 June 2019 (UTC)