User talk:Guintama

Thank you for your contributions to the Shelby Charter Township, Michigan article. However, the way you wrote it sounds more like an advertisement than an encyclopedic entry. It's usually best to avoid words like beautiful, magnificent and the likes because they are all relative concepts. Encyclopedic entries should be concrete. I'm not entirely sure where you can find information on how to rewrite this to wikipedia standards, but I'd start it off with WP:NPOV and WP:Policy.

Sorry if this seems awkward. I mean, you did contribute some nice information, but it would be even nicer if you would wish to learn how it should be written on the wikipedia. They're always looking for good contributers around here :) --MooNFisH 22:26, 1 July 2007 (UTC)