User talk:GumTreeKookabura/Potsdam Declaration

Faison comments 10/26/2022
This is looking great. The only thing I see that you need to do before moving it to the main space is to provide citations in your last section (Japanese response). You allude to various historiographical debates. You need to provide citations. We have talked about Hasegawa's book; also essays from the book Hiroshima in History and Memory. I assume you have consulted specific sources in order to craft those last few paragraphs. Make sure they are cited in your article. Elyssafaison (talk) 17:22, 26 October 2022 (UTC)