User talk:Gurleyneu/Music therapy for Alzheimer's disease

This is a very good draft overall, but there a couple things I noticed that could make it even better.

Introducing or explaining the general functions of each part of the brain you mention would be extremely useful for the reader. It is understandable that you may know what each part you mention does, but people reading it may not be as familiar. You could say something such as, "in other words, x function is improved due to y part of the brain's increased functionality."

Another thing, maybe expand a little more on what an MBI really is. I understand it is a relatively broad topic as you had mentioned, however is it just listening to music? Singing to music? Do these provide different benefits or enhance certain parts of the brain? Do they treat different diseases differently? These are just a few things to consider. In addition, maybe give more examples such as the study you mentioned Beethoven and Chopin, this was a clear point and showed how different types of music create different reactions from the brain; maybe have a portion on how singing helps vs. listening.

Finally, expand on future directions of MBI's if possible, I would love to learn more about where we can go with this and if it is a legitimate treatment that could be used for a while.

Once again, great article and I look forward to reading more! Ben Malgeri