User talk:GurmanS/sandbox

Gurman

Great start. Since this is a medical topic, you will need good secondary sources as reference. You should also link to existing WP pages where they are available. Also, the phrase the primary oocyte will contain both homologous X chromosome pairs. suggests that the cell has 4 X chromosomes ("both pairs"). You should clarify this writing. A heading would also have been helpful. Maybe have a colleague not familiar with genetics read the final draft over for clairity.

Grade 1.25/2 TomHaffie (talk) 00:26, 11 November 2014 (UTC)