User talk:Gusk80/Maternal mortality ratio/Paigeg7311 Peer Review

My peer review of Maternal Mortality Ratio article: I think this article could be improved greatly in multiple ways. Specifically, this article is very bare-bones and only lists a simple set of data. I think the information could be expanded, there are only 6 sources listed for this article and I think the addition of multiple scholarly journals could improve the article. I think the maternal mortality ratio is a very interesting topic that is indicative of the life in global countries and there could be educational analysis of the information already given on the article.
 * Hi! Thank you so much for your peer review. I agree that this article could be expanded on. We decided to divide the Lead section into multiple sections so that we could add some more information in a more organized way. We are also planning to add more sources with this additional info, and thank you for sharing that we should focus on finding scholarly journals! I will keep this in mind when looking for additional sources.

Laurob04 (talk) 01:55, 14 November 2020 (UTC)