User talk:Guthdt

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Hello, Guthdt, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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PEER REVIEW
1. It seems like you have a great start, I would suggest including more details in the newer material. I also think the use of commas is a bit excessive, you might be able to include the same information by using different sentence structures. I would also think about including more details on how it has evolved if you are talking about the modernization. Kamphasm (talk) 15:05, 29 October 2018 (UTC)

Thanks, Sean! I will take these suggestions into consideration when preparing to post to the TCR page. Guthdt (talk) 13:30, 31 October 2018 (UTC)