User talk:Gutier k1

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I think this article is very well rounded and put together. The first paragraph gives a great glimpse as to Malala's life and how the article will move on from there. I do not think that the second paragraph should be on her family and their occupation because she is so much more than her background. The intro definitely sets the stage. The subtopics are very well put together but I would have put the Nobel Peace Prize under "Awards and Honors", it seems more logical.

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Documentary
While I believe that the documentary section should not be hear because this article focuses on the book, I do not want to completely erase other people's work. Do other people think that this section should go?