User talk:GutmKate/sandbox

I wish you had emailed me a list of potential articles instead of simply choosing to do a new one on your own. This is a workable subject, but you are going to need to do some better research and some heavy editing to get this into shape. The research you have is passable, but I think the article would benefit from some newspaper articles from the time of the murder itself. I would look at the sources you have to see what they are citing, or in the case of the Patriot Ledge see if you can gain access to their archives. You might also access the Boston Globe's archives. Though I am not certain, we might have access to these archives through the library. I would strongly recommend talking to a reference librarian if you are in town, or if not emailing them to see if they can help. After you have gathered some better quality sources, then you will want to work to make the article read like an article, and not so much an outline. Clafjaco (talk) 18:43, 5 June 2017 (UTC)