User talk:Guyarv/sandbox/Mannheim

Spelling & Grammar:
-Absolutely perfect. - add a period after "...7,500 people work in Mannheim's medical technology industry" in the first paragraph.

Language:
-All good. Sounds encyclopedic in tone and isn't redundant or repetitive.

Organization:
-Great. I was going to say maybe you could have sections/subheadings, but I don't think it's necessary. It has a logical flow to it anyway.

Coding:
-None whatsoever.

Completeness:
-Very complete. I think you covered a good range of topics.

Relevance:
-Everything seems to be relevant and cohesive.

Citations:
-All citations open and they seem to be good, legitimate sources. Overall, well done. Not bad when the only problem is a missing period. Avictory (talk) 03:18, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

3/20 Evaluation by user:Kristinnmason
Spelling & Grammar: It seems there is a period missing right before your third citation.

Language:  Very Encyclopedic tone. The sentence structure flowed very well.

Organization:  Every paragraph had very relevant information. It was very organized and mostly in chronological order. Coding:  I do not see any coding errors!

Completeness:  It was all complete. I think you could add titles for each section but it is not necessary.

Relevance:  It is a large amount of information but it was all extremely relevant. I really enjoyed the music section.

Citations:  They all look good, other than the one missing period prior to your citation.