User talk:Gvelek/Aklavik First Nation/Lyocampo Peer Review

Hi Gvelek, Thank you for an insightful Wikipedia article. As I was reading your article, I noticed that there was a transparent and neutral perspective throughout that just stated the facts, which means that you were just sticking to the task: providing information on the Aklavik First Nation. I really enjoyed how your article had a quick reference chart that provided information about the people, population, and other information because it is very useful to have in one place that an individual can find. You had a variety of different sections that transitioned smoothly from one section to another, and they were all well-coordinated with the main topic. As I mentioned, you had a number of sections but they were pretty short, so I was not sure if you still needed to add more information to it or if there just wasn't enough information on those specific sections. Under the Governance section, you mention that the Aklavik First Nation is under a Custom Electoral System, but I feel like you could further explain what the system is or how it works. Lastly, you had great usage of resources and citations throughout your writing but maybe implementing some visuals can help liven up the article about the Aklavik First Nation. Overall, great article, I enjoyed learning more about your topic.

Lyocampo (talk) 03:14, 19 May 2022 (UTC)Lyocampo