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Assignment 3
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/64th_Transportation_Company

This article does not include very much information. The sentence structure is repetitive and they do not give you a format that is user friendly. This article needs a very strong lead to add some value to what it is representing. For someone who isn't in the military, it can be very confusing to understand and to get a clear view on what this particular Transportation Det. is about and what they entail in their line of duty. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gyoun12 (talk • contribs) 04:56, 4 March 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 1
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Crime_in_Chicago — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gyoun12 (talk • contribs) 04:42, 4 March 2015 (UTC)