User talk:Gzaf21/sandbox

Peer Review (English 1102-053)
Label your paragraphs because I'm confused what is what in the article and I don't know the difference between each paragraph. Your citations are good and all of the links to your references work perfectly. From what I saw, there are no grammar or spelling errors. Good information, but put in more info if you can and everything is well detailed in my honest opinion. PhilipRK101 (talk) 15:05, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

I think your article has a great outline and is very easy to follow. You did a great job turning complicated medical terminology into an easy read. All of your information is cited as well. Are you going to keep the current pages lead in?Mancionel (talk) 15:11, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

Since this is a medical condition, I recommend linking some of the words that some readers may not understand and avoid them looking them up themselves; for ex. words such as (spores, host, allergic reaction, etc.)Mancionel (talk) 15:15, 26 April 2018 (UTC)