User talk:H.hoangtn

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Hello, H.hoangtn, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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I wasn't sure whether or not to include this on your talk page or sandbox, so it's on both! Great article! I like how you highlighted certain topics so the reader could learn more about them from a different article (e.g. The Lee Silverman Voice Treatment)! Your sources all look great too, all from reviews or meta-analyses. Just a couple things to consider: make sure every sentence is followed by a citation, and maybe try to simplify some of the complicated terms used if possible!. I was advised not to put spaces between my references and to only have 2-3 references after a given sentence just to keep the article flowing more smoothly. I'm not sure if references are to come before or after the periods but just make sure you're consistent with which one you choose, I think there was one instance where the reference came after but for the most part the references were before the periods. Great job keeping an objective tone to the article though! Great balance of sources throughout the article, there was no one article that was heavily cited in comparison to any other. You could expand more on the surgical treatments just to balance out the information you provide by types of treatment, unless it's another section of the article. Overall great work! I enjoyed reading up on this subject. Chloe.93 (talk) 00:23, 29 October 2016 (UTC)