User talk:HC Dunn

Kolo (albums)
I have a question about the comments that appear at the top of the entry for "Kolo (albums)." The comments state that the article is not written from a neutral point of view and that it reads like advertising, but the article appears to be written in encyclopedic style to me. I just added some new information to this article (about the advent of digital photography and how it changed consumer photo-printing options), so I can see on the editing page that this article has been well edited. So perhaps the comments about the article (that it is not written in a neutral tone and reads like advertising) are no longer relevant. That's my observation. Thanks HC Dunn (talk) 19:24, 30 July 2010 (UTC) HC Dunn