User talk:HD1019/sandbox2

Hi Himani, You have identified an area on the Covellite page that could use some expansion, so you’re on the right track. It looks like the information you plan to add will be quite thorough and you will improve the structure and clarity of the article. I recommend comparing what the superconductors page says to avoid overlap, and when possible add links to those pages. It’s great that you have listed so many new sources.

Here are a few other aspects that you could work on/look into to improve the page in general: - Many of the sentences introducing covellite could use some sources. - This sentence needs a source: “As a primary mineral, the formation of covellite is restricted to hydrothermal conditions.” - Does Naturally-occurring require a hyphen? - The geologic occurrence section seems to heavily bias the US. Can you add any more information from other areas? For example, it was first identified at Mount Vesuvius but there is very little mention about how it occurs at this locality (other than as a volcanic sublimate… and could you add a link to the volcanic sublimate page too). Also, you could add a link to the Mount Vesuvius page where it is first mentioned at the top of the article. --TA ERTH4303 (talk) 14:27, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback. I will definitely look into comparing the superconductors page and add links to other Wikipedia articles as required. The previous additions did not have sources but I will continue researching to find information. HD1019 (talk) 14:43, 5 April 2019 (UTC)

Hi Himani,

You have discussed the use of copper sulfide and its use as a cathode material in lithium-ion batteries. To me covellite is not specific to this technology. Elaborate how extracting covellite as opposed to other copper bearing ore minerals is beneficial if you are to include this section.

--Matt.trenkler (talk) 18:32, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! I will do some more research to ensure covellite's usage in the batteries is what is being examined rather than other copper ore minerals. HD1019 (talk) 14:43, 5 April 2019 (UTC)