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Peer Review - Michael Loson
It appears you're off to a good start and have collected a lot of good sources to use for your article.

As for changes, the first couple of edits to the article seem like good ones and I think your focus would help the article. It would be nice to get some general overview about American Women without changing pages. I would also suggest expanding your efforts outside of American women. I know that my thesis review mentioned that our final research paper can't be on the United States, so shifting the research might help you with that assignment too. There's also plenty of opportunity to add that information to this article. There seems to be a lot of information about British women, but other countries have huge openings for you to find and add information to the article. If you picked up a few sources on women from those countries, you might be able to make a huge contribution to the article.

Good Luck.

Peer review from Christian
You've certainty got a lot of information so far! It seems like you've got a lot to sort through but with all your sources and the template already laid out for you I'm sure you'll be fine! Good luck!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by ChristianDelano (talk • contribs) 01:17, 21 April 2018 (UTC)