User talk:HMW.1995

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Hello, HMW.1995, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback on Article Contribution
Henry, Good contribution! The statement "able to make a valid contribution to electricity demands" doesn't sound neutral. Validity implies judgment so try re-phrasing that sentence.

Drshimizu (talk) 19:14, 4 November 2019 (UTC) 