User talk:HacateKentu

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Speedy deletion nomination of Mistserver


A tag has been placed on Mistserver, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Talkback
ItsZippy (talk • contributions) 14:52, 20 August 2013 (UTC)

Userfication
Hi HacateKentu. I've userfied your article for you - you can find it at User:HacateKentu/Mistserver. In terms of improvement, I would suggest you make the prose less promotional, and look for reliable sources which will establish notability. You need to find sources that are independent from the subject of the article and are reliable - this should give you an idea of what you need. If you need any help, just let me know. ItsZippy (talk • contributions) 14:23, 21 August 2013 (UTC)

MistServer
Hi HacateKentu, thanks for your message. I've taken a look at your improvements - you've made a good start, but there's still a bit to do. The first two paragraphs are still very promotional (I see you haven't edited them at all) - you will need to rewrite that bit to make it more neutral. Specifically, it is sentences like "lightweight, open-source multi-standard multimedia server developed by DDVTECH" and "It bridges the gap between lightweight web servers and the usually heavyweight media servers that support non-HTTP protocols" which sound like extracts from an advertisement. See if you can just describe what the product is, rather than writing about why it's any good. Also, the sources you added all seem to be dead links, which is a slight concern - see if you can fix those. I can take a look at it and make a few edits if you like, but I won't be able to do so very soon. Let me know if you have any further questions. ItsZippy (talk • contributions) 15:46, 23 September 2013 (UTC)