User talk:Haeseong mit/sandbox

Hi Heaseong,

I think you did a great job. Your sentences are clear and to do point. Considering the original page, which has basically no information other than the title your page looks very informative. Your language is formal which is good I think.

As one very minor suggestion, maybe you can explain the equation little bit more. I think the link that you have added gives more information but it can be nice to have some information about the variables in the equation.

Best, Hazal

Nadidehazal (talk) 18:03, 5 December 2018 (UTC)