User talk:Haifaalburek

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Hello, Haifaalburek, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Welcome to Wikipedia and don't forget to refer to the online resources to exhibit good sound articles

Larry — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lunchmeat30 (talk • contribs) 04:45, 5 September 2016 (UTC)

Hello
I just wanted to say hello and hope you are doing well in class. Heronhaus (talk) 19:57, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

New section
For my part I will add new section to our original topic which is Home Automation. The new section is about security on home automation. Security on home automation is a developing aspect for the Internet of Things. This includes securing the data in-between connected devices and the devices themselves. Currently, security has developed into the following topcis: •	Device security •	System Security •	Environment focused environment

Device Security •	Device fingerprinting •	Mobile device security

There is a dual focus on the security of the devices. Device fingerprinting is evolving with improvements and failures of the approach. Using a dual approach of device fingerprinting and login credentials, provide a high level of security and identification, up to 97.93%. Mobile device security demand is growing with the volume of connected devices grows. HASec, Home Automation and Security system for mobile devices, operates and controls the device though motion detectors and video camera for remote sensing, surveillance, live video streams, record for playback, and manages the device operation. This includes turning the device on or off. For security, the detected motion will trigger alerts for possible violations. The main components for interaction include iOS application for device interaction and server scripts for interaction with the cloud. System Security •	Reed Solomon codes •	Embedded programmable logic controller •	Vision based intelligent security system •	Agent based system •	Zigbee security – attribute based re-encryption •	Intrusion checkers to resist malicious attacks System security involves many layers of the Internet of things (IoT). As the IoT grows, system integrity becomes important to avoid negative risks such as catastrophic errors. Using Reed Solomon Codes for error detection and correction before any operation invoked by the user gets executed can assist in preventing such occurrences. Allowing for affordable security is also important. An embedded programmable logic controller based security method was designed which prevents simple manipulation of user data. The integrity of the system is secured using a simplified sequence, rolling code encryption of the transmitted data.

Visual surveillance is the main aspect of any intelligent home security system. Various technological developments will provide operation of the system and identifying the number of people, when to operate, and allow for efficient use of the devices. Data collection is a normal process for systems and protecting the data also becomes important. Sensors are connected to a host network to improve processing, achieve high reliability, and reduce costs.

A ZigBee network is considered as the most attractive technology for home automation such as high availability, low power consumption and cost-effective device for constructing the wireless sensor network. This allows users to designate home network and control home appliances depending on their connectivity and ease of use.

Remote device vulnerabilities have provided for improved security needs throughout any system. Examples of this risk include garage door openers, automobiles, and home appliances. Light weight intrusion checkers are based on detecting irregular operations by comparing the current firmware execution with the past recurrent execution behavior. Any deviation is identified and evaluated which provide for clear detection with negligible risk.

Environment focused environment •	Low cost energy security management Using dynamic priority for household appliances and its current status provide for the low cost energy deployment for systems now and in the future. This includes the scheduling for renewable energy capability for all devised in the system.

References: A. C. Jose, R. Malekian and N. Ye, "Improving Home Automation Security; Integrating Device Fingerprinting Into Smart Home," in IEEE Access, vol. 4, no., pp. 5776-5787, 2016. S. R. Das, S. Chita, N. Peterson, B. A. Shirazi and M. Bhadkamkar, "Home automation and security for mobile devices," Pervasive Computing and Communications Workshops (PERCOM Workshops), 2011 IEEE International Conference on, Seattle, WA, 2011, pp. 141-146. I. A. Shah, F. A. Malik and S. A. Ahmad, "Enhancing security in IoT based Home automation using Reed Solomon Codes," 2016 International Conference on Wireless Communications, Signal Processing and Networking (WiSPNET), Chennai, 2016, pp. 1639-1642. G. Cebrat, "Secure web based home automation: Application layer based security using embedded programmable logic controller," Information and Communication Technology (ICoICT), 2014 2nd International Conference on, Bandung, 2014, pp. 302-307. M. S. Sefat, A. A. M. Khan and M. Shahjahan, "Implementation of vision based intelligent home automation and security system," Informatics, Electronics & Vision (ICIEV), 2014 International Conference on, Dhaka, 2014, pp. 1-6. doi: 10.1109/ICIEV.2014.6850818 D. Bordencea, H. Valean, S. Folea and A. Dobircau, "Agent based system for home automation, monitoring and security," Telecommunications and Signal Processing (TSP), 2011 34th International Conference on, Budapest, 2011, pp. 165-169. doi: 10.1109/TSP.2011.6043750 H. Seo and H. Kim, "Zigbee security for visitors in home automation using attribute based proxy re-encryption," Consumer Electronics (ISCE), 2011 IEEE 15th International Symposium on, Singapore, 2011, pp. 304-307. D. M. Shila, P. Geng and T. Lovett, "I can detect you: Using intrusion checkers to resist malicious firmware attacks," 2016 IEEE Symposium on Technologies for Homeland Security (HST), Waltham, MA, 2016, pp. 1-6. B. Nallathambi and M. K. S. Nithyakala, "Low cost home energy management with security and automation," Electronics and Communication Systems (ICECS), 2014 International Conference on, Coimbatore, 2014, pp. 1-5. 2602:306:377E:F340:60B2:620:7D11:D3BF (talk) 04:26, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

Feedback request


I got your message. Can you let me know what specifically thing I can give you feedback on? Thanks. (When replying to this message, please include  in your response, to ensure that I see your reply.) Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:06, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

Nice start to your draft. A few things that need fixing
 * 1) You need to do a careful copyedit. Your tense is inconsistent - you go from singular to plural - and there are sentence fragments like
 * 2) Some statements are unclear. For example, you say  but you never say what devices you're talking about.
 * 3) Your reference system is a mess. I'm not sure what you were trying to do, but please change them to proper inline references using the VisualEditor (as explained in the training modules).
 * 4) Your draft lacks sections. You have bullet points, but they are not properly formatted. You have no links to other articles.

Please take a careful look at the Editing Wikipedia brochure and make sure that your draft meets the requirements. You should have received a hard copy from your instructor, but just in case, I have linked to it above. Let me know when you've gotten it up it up to standard. (When replying to this message, please include  in your response, to ensure that I see your reply.) Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:32, 25 October 2016 (UTC)

Follow up
I'm sorry, but according to Special:Contributions/Haifaalburek you haven't made any improvements to your draft since I left you the feedback in the section above. What, precisely, do you expect from me at this point? Please do explain. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:14, 5 December 2016 (UTC)

Further feedback

 * There are some pretty severe problems with your tone and phrasing. For example

This sentence doesn't make sense. Neither "contemplations" nor "bona fide" works there.

"Profitable" doesn't belong here, neither was "astute". And whether that statement is "obvious" or not is an opinion and doesn't belong in a Wikipedia article.


 * Wikipedia articles are supposed to be written in a formal tone and style

If you use the word "you", if you speak directly to your reader, you're probably on the wrong track. Remember that we're supposed to be reporting on sourced facts - what source would support a statement like that?

Similarly

Apart from the parenthetical question (which doesn't belong), "recollect" isn't the correct word here (it would be "remember" or "recall"). Also sticking "well" in there is far too informal. More to the point, this needs to be supported by a source (who said this?) and it should be concrete. When was the start of sci-fi? The history of science fiction suggests that the beginnings of sci-fi are by no means clear.

Why is the US Declaration of Independence relevant here?

"Fast-forward a couple of hundreds of years" isn't appropriate in formal writing. Nor is it accurate, since 1985 isn't in the mid 1900s. These are just a small sample of the problems. You really need to rework the entire thing.


 * Points 3 and 4 from back in October are still relevant. Please use inline references, and please add properly-formatted sections. Thanks. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:59, 7 December 2016 (UTC)

Home automation
I can appreciate you are enthusiastic, but there is no way in Terra that the Uniscope 300 has anything remotely to do with Home automation. Thus everything else you've just put into there must be similarly suspect. At the very least, you need to find out how to properly reference whatever you mean by "N. Pham and Y. Tanaka, 2014". Is that a book? What page? What did they say? (Might be needed for discussion on article talk page) Shenme (talk) 05:47, 11 December 2016 (UTC)