User talk:Haig Cholakian/sandbox

Peer Review
Hey Haig, this is a nice start. The article's blurb on the top is informative and brief, fitting nicely with the existing style needed. I recommend maybe adding a section or subsection that states his influences on writing, as there are probably many! Just a though :) - Cris — Preceding unsigned comment added by HarColl162 (talk • contribs) 02:11, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

The abstract that you have so far seems pretty good structure wise! I would like to recommend adding a photo, although that comes later!

ZenZorro (talk) 14:26, 21 March 2018 (UTC) ZenZorro

The basic info section looks good. It's very clear and hits all the important information I think. For possible categories to add, I think you could add information about his other works, his travel (?), and his personal life (different from early life?). Looks good so far though!! Nazhagen (talk) 23:53, 25 March 2018 (UTC)