User talk:Hailey8405/A Voice from the South/Gmarinello19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Hailey8405)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * A Voice from the South


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * A Voice from the South

Evaluate the drafted changes
The last sentences added to the Lead reflect the new content you added. This information helps the viewer realize there will be specific information about the book added below. The content added is relevant because it has to do with the novel and only adds more information that was needed for the Wikipedia page. Furthermore, the content added only explains the authors voice within the novel. The only voice from the page comes from the author herself. The organization of the page is quite confusing. Having explained there are two parts in the Lead, I cannot tell if there is one or four sections shown below. However, in regards to the organization I believe you are simply not done yet and is still working on adding another part along with more individual essays. Also, the summary will probably be added to as well. The image provided is perfect for the page. It does not seem that there needs to be more added to that portion. Overall, the work on this page is great and the information added was absolutely necessary for a better understanding of the novel. The quality of the page was improved and it is obvious where you are going with the page which will nearly, if not completely, make it complete. Gmarinello19 (talk) 19:41, 29 November 2022 (UTC)