User talk:Hailey959/Exchange Place (pedestrian only)

Peer reviewed you draft! Jerrial (talk) 07:38, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Jerrial McNutt

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This is an outstanding start to this article. The depth and detail you've offered is really impressive. I hope that level of complexity continues as you expand to include, at least, a section on the current state of Exchange Place, focusing on its significance within the city today. In particular, you might include some discussion of the restaurants that have recently populated the alley

What's missing right now are all the citations. You lists references at the end, but there's no indication of which passages of the article come from which of those references. You need to incorporate the citations as we dicussed in class.

Great work so far! jtodd1973 20:19, 7 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtodd1973 (talk • contribs)