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Yahya Ekhou moved to draftspace
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Cabrils (talk) 03:25, 27 January 2024 (UTC)


 * thank you Cabrils
 * I appreciate your support and I will do my best to develop my skills.
 * Best regards Hammer-Sabrine (talk) 00:15, 28 January 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yahya Ekhou (January 29)
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Liberals Mauritania moved to draftspace
Thanks for your contributions to Liberals Mauritania. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources and the only external link is non-independent.. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

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Cinema of Africa
Dear Hammer-Sabrine, Thank you for your interest in this article. Can i make some remarks? 1. You added too many and bare links, which violate the layout. If you want to keep some of them, they could and should be couched in references using Template:Cite web, for instance. Compare with say Licínio Azevedo, or any other article using this template. (You can view the coding by just pressing the Edit button and not saving anything if you don't intend to.) Your links: Isn't this a better reference: https://africultures.com/personnes/?no=53660 ? 2. Can we prove with a reliable source (not some blog or self-published text) that Ekhou won an award and so is of encyclopedic value? 3. Then it is still better to first start a separate biographical Wikipedia article on Mai Ekhou, before adding her to the overview article Cinema of Africa, you agree? 4. Your wording was that of a hard sell of Ekhou, is that appropriate for an encyclopedia? Thank you, Cheers, Hansmuller (talk) 11:01, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
 * GONE AND NEVER BACK: Le voile de l’oppression
 * MaiEkhou.com
 * Fierté et réalité du cinéma mauritanien
 * Hollywood Las Vegas Film Festival
 * African women in cinema
 * Luxor African film festival. 2016
 * 2017
 * Embora pra Sempre
 * lensculture

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yahya Ekhou (February 7)
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Cabrils (talk) 22:25, 7 February 2024 (UTC)

Cinema of Africa (2)
Dear Hammer-Sabrine, Thank you for the improvements you made to your biography of Mauritanian film director Mai Ekhou, using templates and more. Can i make some further remarks?
 * The article Cinema of Africa is intended as a balanced overview article, for the most famous filmmakers. Therefore, we should not accommodate all upcoming interesting filmmakers in the main text. (But we could list them in the section Cinema_of_Africa if they are of encyclopedic value). For an encyclopedia, it works best to first give personalities their own separate and dedicated biography, before mentioning them succinctly in an overview article. Rungano Nyoni for instance got four lines. Jimmy Wales, one of the founders of Wikipedia, was inspired by the Encyclopedia Brittanica, still more expert and stylistically superior than this Wikipedia. The Brittanica wouldn't put a person's whole biography in an overview.
 * So isn't it better to first start a separate biography for Mai Ekhou, before we perhaps might mention her briefly on the overview page, you agree?
 * I removed the Ekhou section from Cinema of Africa and save the latest version below. Thank you for your interest and your work, Cheers, Hansmuller (talk) 10:57, 15 February 2024 (UTC):

Latest version on Mai Ekhou from article Cinema of Africa

Mai Ekhou, born in Nouakchott, Mauritania, in 1987, spent her childhood and youth in Libya and Tunisia. She is a versatile artist involved in both photography and filmmaking. Since 2011, she has garnered international acclaim for her photography, participating in various competitions and exhibitions. In filmmaking since 2012, Ekhou has served as an assistant director and independent director, acclaimed for her work, which has earned her numerous awards. She is recognized as the first women Mauritanian director.

Recognized as an Influential African Woman in Society (2017) by British Oxfam.

Elected as a member of the selection and arbitration committees at various festivals: - SFTF Film Festival - Columbia. - Hollywood Las Vegas Film Festival - United States. - Kobani International Film Festival - Syria. - Jerusalem Visual Media Festival - Jerusalem.

She got Jury Prize, Nouakchott International Film Festival (2015), Mention at the Arab International Film Festival in Gabes (2016), First place in the short film competition at the Arab Youth Creativity Festival in Cairo (2019) ,Third place at the African Oscar Festival in Cairo (2019), Special mention from the jury, International Film Festival in Iran (2019).

producing notable works such as (The End-2014) ("Ishtar and Isis- 2015," )( First Box- 2016) ("Bells"-2017)( It's not over yet- 2019)  (  Gone and Never Back -2020)       ("Pastitsio" (2020)   "70 Women" (2021)

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