User talk:HanaIverson/LGBT in the Middle East

Hi HanaIverson, I just reviewed your article, overall you did a good job. I only have couple suggestions for you. 1) In your "Violence and Discrimination against LGBT people in Middle East" paragraph, add some examples on what kind of discrimination or violence is happening there? This way it will be more clearer to the readers and will not seems like missing information. 2) In your "Public opinion", paragraph, I doubt their might be some studies have already done on it. Additionally, In your last line, I think you are giving your own personal opinion or suggestion on conducting more data on it. I believe we are not allowed to give our own opinions. Either remove it or rephrase it in a way that sounds like more neutral. 3) One of your sources, "The Arab bed Spring?" is coming from company which might not be reliable source. However, it sounds like a source with accurate information. If you can find the similar information from some of the reliable sources, it will be perfect. If you could not find it, then you can stick with it. Let me know if you have any questions regarding my suggestions. Thank you!Shahzia Perveen (talk) 21:43, 8 November 2019 (UTC)