User talk:Hancun123/The rise of Esport in China

Draft
This looks like a decent draft. More info and more inline sourcing (i.e. citation). Keep going! ProfHanley (talk) 17:32, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Peer review
Just did your peer review. You need a lot more information and you need to cite your sources. Why are esports games popular? What Esports games specifically are you talking about in your article? Blause Winterz (talk) 19:02, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Hello, I just completed your peer review. The article is very well written and concise. I would suggest to add more information and sources to make it bigger. Also Check up on the sources your provided that they are up to date and properly point out to your information. IDOSALSA101 (talk) 19:37, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Draft II
No work on this article in two weeks. You've got good peer review - - use it to keep drafting. ProfHanley (talk) 17:21, 31 October 2023 (UTC)

Draft III
This draft is looking good. Before sprucing up - - adding images and/or links - - you need to cite your sources inline. I.e. use the "cite" button in visual editor to insert citations, create superscripts, and generate works cited. ProfHanley (talk) 17:35, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Draft IV
Not much more progress here. Cite sources inline. You will need more than two sources. ProfHanley (talk) 17:25, 14 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello professor, can you please check if there is anything else I need to do with my draft so I can get a green light on it?
 * Thanks! Hancun123 (talk) 03:24, 29 November 2023 (UTC)