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Demographics of the United Arab Emirates (editing)
Population Historical population Year	Pop. ±% 1950	70,000	—   1960	90,000	+28.6% 1970	232,000	+157.8% 1980	1,016,000	+337.9% 1990	1,809,000	+78.1% 2000	3,033,000	+67.7% 2010	7,512,000	+147.7% Source: UN[1]:162 Population growth in the United Arab Emirates is among the highest in the world, at 2.47% for the year 2016.[2] Immigration is the largest factor contributing to this growth. Expatriate workers in the UAE made up 90% of the country's workforce in 2013 and accounted for 7.8 million people out of a population of 9.2 million.[3] females citizens and noncitizens make up only 30 percent of the UAE'S population due to the high level of male foreign workers[4]. The biggest city in UAE is Dubai and remain so in 2030. Also, all of the cities in the UAE will increase in size from now to 2030. However, Abu Dhabi will grow the fastest. [5] World Urbanization Prospects announced that the UAE’s population went from 54.4 percent to 84.4 percent between 1950 and 2010. The rate for the urbanization went up to 2.9 percent in that time period, this is one of the highest rates in the world. [6]UAE's census data noted a seven-fold increase in its population between 1975 and 2005. Education and Employment The United Arab Emirates government have always focused on increasing the quality of education, allowing female access to higher education and value their achievements. Currently, there are more women in higher education than men, with total graduates of 58 percent. However, the unemployment rate for women is about more than five times higher than men. The program that is the most popular is business with the highest number of graduates, and the second popular program is Humanities and social science. [9] The UAE relies on migrant workers, and they make up a majority of the population and will continue to increase and will be about 88.2 percent of the population in 2030. [10]
 * I added a new content to the article which is education and employment and added more information to the population section which is ( The biggest city in UAE is Dubai and remain so in 2030. Also, all of the cities in the UAE will increase in size from now to 2030. However, Abu Dhabi will grow the fastest. [5] World Urbanization Prospects announced that the UAE’s population went from 54.4 percent to 84.4 percent between 1950 and 2010. The rate for the urbanization went up to 2.9 percent in that time period, this is one of the highest rates in the world) I used the journal articles Progress in female education and employment in the United Arab Emirates towards Millennium Development Goal (3): gender equality, "United Arab Emirates in 2030: The Future Demographic" is now available at Fast Market Research, and Economic growth, electricity consumption, urbanization and environmental degradation relationship in United Arab Emirates to gather the information and make some changes to the article.

 This is a good start - but I can't tell what the sources are that you've included? Make sure these are inserted properly - Prof H 

Zakira's Edits
separating the years from the population size in the first paragraph with a colon or bracket will make it easier to read and comprehend. The second sentence was started with a number (162), which is not done. Consider adding words such as About, approximately, etc. to the beginning of the sentence before the number. Also, the "f" in the fourth line needs capitalization. Further more, the now in " Also all of the cities in the UAE will increase in size from now to 2030" needs to be specified. Are you referring to 2018-2030 or what? Your sentence " Currently, there are more women in higher education than men" needs to be backed up by statistics. Finally, the links to the citations are not formatted right so it cannot be accessed. Zakira seidu (talk) 03:48, 3 April 2018 (UTC)