User talk:Hank323

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 John C. Picardi, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. Thank you for helping Wikipedia! Steven Zhang The clock is ticking....  02:45, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
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Your Picardi article
I am fixing it right now, please hold off for a moment. The references you are adding right now are somewhat malformed, but they can probably all be fixed. You can discuss the changes in IRC, I'll be in there for a little while. Shearonink (talk) 04:01, 30 June 2011 (UTC)

This is what I have edited the Picardi article to.
John C. Picardi is the author of the plays The Sweepers, and Seven Rabbits on a Pole. His plays are published by Samuel French and have been produced off-Broadway at Urban Stages in Manhattan and across the United States. Sweepers received positive reviews in the Los Angeles Times. Lawrence Van Gelder of the New York Times favorably reviewed both plays. Van Gelder said about Sweepers that "Mr. Picardi's writing renders his characters timeless". His review of Seven Rabbits on a Pole opened with "An epic is in the making".