User talk:HannahHeg

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kostal Group (March 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Theroadislong were:

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Theroadislong (talk) 11:49, 12 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Hello Theroadislong,
 * thank you for the feedback.
 * To be honest I do not have the feeling to have written the article in a advertising way. From my perspective it is focused on information and facts about the company and nothing was highlighted in a too positive way. Is there a specific part that caused this feeling for you? In advance I had a look at the page from Porsche for example and could see no difference but of course I am open to change any parts.
 * Thanks HannahHeg (talk) 13:33, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Well for instance the first paragraph contains this "Its customers include major industrial companies, in particular all the world's leading car manufacturers and their suppliers, as well as successful companies from the photovoltaic sector." which is entirely promotional. Theroadislong (talk) 13:37, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

Paid editing
Hello HannahHeg. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

Paid advocates are strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are  required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:HannahHeg. The template Paid can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form:. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message. Theroadislong (talk) 13:40, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kostal Group (March 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


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DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:21, 12 March 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Kostal Group has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Kostal Group. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 14:25, 12 March 2024 (UTC)