User talk:HannahNRogers19/Webkinz

Instructor comments 4.24.2020
I appreciate the clarifications and additions you've made so far.

In order to get credit for the Wikipedia project, though, I do want you to have added at least two significant sections to the article, not just revised internally. I see you've got headings - Tournament Arena, etc. Are those placeholders for new sections?

A couple small stylistic/proofing notes: Elizabeth.f.chamberlain (talk) 14:52, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * If you can, avoid the second person ("you can"); encyclopedic style prefers third person ("users can")
 * Watch out for double periods at the end of sentences; I see a few of those