User talk:HannahWV/sandbox

Hi Hannah,

Out of the topics you provided I think greenfield land would be the most suitable.

Peer Reviewed by Yunxin Song: Overall, this is a very well done dray because the tone is neutral and the structure is well organised and easy to read through by using several sub-headings. The article gives a clear definition of clay and explains the identification of clay. It also provides a detailed information of historical and modern uses of clay, such as medical uses, which is help reader to recognize the importance of clay. Majority of references are peer-reviewed article and they are reliable. It is better to provide more detailed information about the characteristics of clay such as porosity and its distribution. After all, this is a nice draft! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yunxin Song (talk • contribs) 19:40, 25 March 2019 (UTC)

Hi Yunxin,

Thank you for the peer review! I'm glad that you find the structure of the article to be well-organized. I agree that it would be good to provide more detailed land about the characteristics of clay such as porosity and distribution.

Thank you for sending your thoughts! — Preceding unsigned comment added by HannahWV (talk • contribs) 19:26, 31 March 2019 (UTC)