User talk:Hannahabigail/sandbox

Zakira's Edits
This was a good edit. The citations were cited correctly, numbers were presented to backup statements, and sections were labeled. However, in your edit you stated that "open-view the United States use sterilization". Can you clarify this statement? Were you trying to say the united states use sterilization more than other contraceptive? To me it sounded like an incomplete sentence. Also can you reword the sentence " Education is still one of the largest barriers to understanding family planning and contraception, yet India has the largest adult population, which is even more reason to push education and prevention on a vulnerable population." To me it seems like you are focusing on only adult women for family planning and contraception use. Let's not forget that childbearing age is from 15-44 year old. Overall good job on the edits.Zakira seidu (talk) 04:29, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
I like what you included to keep the information updated. I think it would be a great asset if you also included some updated numbers to the state and country comparisons and possibly the current predictions of the birth rates. I also think you should update the section of the two child policy and see what is India's current stance on the matter after it was repealed in 2005. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ashlie Vira (talk • contribs) 05:49, 3 April 2018 (UTC)