User talk:Hannahbeasley17/Paragould High School

Hannah, you've done a great job finding sources for so many of the things that were unsourced in the extracurricular activities section. Your edit will take that section from basically totally unsourced to pretty deeply sourced, which is wonderful.

It looks like the only section you've added is the "Volleyball" subsection. I've been asking folks to add at least two sections to their chosen articles; can you add another one, e.g. maybe one about the history of the name/mascot, or the consolidation into Ridgecrest, or about the campus more broadly (how many buildings? built when?)?

Stylistically, I have a couple comments:


 * Your basketball, band, and volleyball sections should be at the same level of heading as "Football" (so with two equals signs around them)
 * Your sources so far are just links; this is risky because of link rot. If you let wikipedia's automatic citation generator do its thing, usually it can make pretty good sense of sources; sometimes you have to add an author's name or the name of the piece or something.
 * There are a few moments of what Wikipedia style guides call "Peacocking," where there are overly glowing words (mostly from the other writers, not you), e.g. "the legendary Coach Paynter," "crowning programs."

Elizabeth.f.chamberlain (talk) 16:30, 22 April 2020 (UTC)