User talk:Hannahmaedunn

Welcome!
Hello, Hannahmaedunn, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hello Hannah! Your overall information that you have started on your page on the YOLO bypass looks great. My comments would be to add subheadings, to better understand what each section is discussing. For example I feel the wildlife area should be titled so, making it easier for people to find exactly what there looking for and there particular interest. I also think that a map of the Bypass and its watersheds would be extremely beneficial, because you did a great job explaining its geography but it helps to have a visual in this type of context. Overall I think your getting great info. --Manatee maiden (talk) 16:47, 21 April 2016 (UTC)

Response
Thank you! I'm not sure if i have quite enough information for subheadings, as i already have the regular headings but i will keep that in mind. And in regards to the wildlife area, there is actually already a separate wiki page for that, so i am hoping to add a link to that! I will also work on finding a picture to use.

Outline feedback
Hi Hannah,

Your outline looks good, and will be an important contribution to the article!

You were supposed to include citations for this assignment. What sources are you going to use?

Julianfulton (talk) 18:07, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

Feedback
Thanks for your additions to the Yolo Bypass article. I noticed that you didn't include your references in the text you added, you just made a list at the end of the page. Done like that, there's no way to readers to know what parts of the article are supported by which sources. Please convert these to inline references - if you need a reminder how to do that, please check out the relevant part of the student training. Thanks. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:39, 5 May 2016 (UTC)