User talk:Hannahrosebuc/sandbox

Hannah the edits that you have suggested for the video game culture page would be a good addition. From what you have so far it sounds neutral enough to fit in the rules set by Wikipedia so just keep doing what you're doing there. There were no glaring issues grammatically, maybe just make sure that you don't end up with any run on sentences. It's really cool that you're going to be adding information to this page about who all is actually playing video games. It will definitely help that there will now be more than just a few statistics for people to read about. Just keep expanding on what you have already written and it will be a great enhancement to the article.

Response to peer review
Cool, thank you for the feedback! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hannahrosebuc (talk • contribs) 03:51, 20 April 2018 (UTC)

"Drafting for Hip-Hop Feminism Wiki Page" Peer Review
Hi Hannah,

Your draft notes on hip hop feminist scholars is excellent; your work explains what each scholar has contributed to hip-hop feminism. I like how you specifically state what aspects of hip-hop feminism each scholar focuses on in their work. I see that your work is already on the Hip-hop feminism Wikipedia page! :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Canea2016 (talk • contribs) 21:43, 12 May 2018 (UTC)