User talk:Hannahschnelle

Intro looks good everything is cited. In the attacks section you need to spell out military police the first time followed by MP then you can use the abbreviation. I am curious when you say the Delhi police if they are Delhi police or New Delhi police or what the difference is. You have a lot of good information everything seems to be neutral and cited very well.Sullybug (talk) 14:08, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

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